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The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.
The pie charts compare the percentage of three different electricity sources produced in four major countries from 2003 to 2008. Overall, while Vietnam and India produced considerably higher electricity from fossil fuel, Sweden and Morocco appeared to harness hydro power as their main electricity source. Only India and Sweden had electricity produced from nuclear power. Among four mentioned nations, India electricity depended mostly on fossil fuel, which accounted for over four fifths. Meanwhile, Sweden and Morocco used only 4 per cent and 5 per cent this source, respectively, for electricity production. Hydro power was used mainly in Morocco, which made up 95 per cent, followed by Sweden, where over a half electricity production was responsible by hydro power, while India electricity production depended 14 per cent on this source, which was the smallest figure compared to other nations. Nuclear power, however, was exploited only in India and Sweden, which consituted 4 per cent and 44 per cent, respectively.
The pie charts compare the percentage of three
different
electricity
sources
produced in four major countries from 2003 to 2008.

Overall
, while Vietnam and India produced
considerably
higher
electricity
from fossil fuel, Sweden and Morocco appeared to harness hydro
power
as their main
electricity
source
.
Only
India and Sweden had
electricity
produced from nuclear power.

Among four mentioned nations, India
electricity
depended
mostly
on fossil fuel, which accounted for over four fifths. Meanwhile, Sweden and Morocco
used
only
4 per cent and 5 per cent this
source
,
respectively
, for
electricity
production.

Hydro
power
was
used
mainly
in Morocco, which made up 95 per cent, followed by Sweden, where over a half
electricity
production was responsible by hydro
power
, while India
electricity
production depended 14 per cent on this
source
, which was the smallest figure compared to other nations.

Nuclear
power
,
however
,
was exploited
only
in India and Sweden, which
consituted
4 per cent and 44 per cent,
respectively
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

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5 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
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