The graphs give us a brief idea about the various changes that have taken place in 6 different employment sectors in Freedonia based on the population of both male and female sexes from 1975 to 1995. Though there isn't a major increase in the overall number of employees, some of the individual sectors showed a notable increase in its work population.
The defence sector had the least number of men and women and even though there was a slight variation in the number of women the number of men in this sector remained the same in both the years. Manufacturing at 600 above men, 250 women and public sector apart from the defence at 800 above men and 600 above women in a thousand workers had no significant changes in both the years whatsoever. Most changes had been in the communication, finance and wholesale sectors with a large increase in the number of people from 1975 to 1995 speak out in the volume of the interest of the general public towards these sectors. Communication and wholesale sector had seen a huge hike in the number of women even overtaking men in the process.
On these grounds, I conclude by saying the prominence of women in employment sectors in Freedonia is evident when we compare the graph of 1995 and 1975.
The graphs give us a brief
idea
about the various
changes
that have taken place in 6
different
employment
sectors
in
Freedonia
based on the population of both male and female sexes from 1975 to 1995. Though there isn't a major increase in the
overall
number
of employees,
some of the
individual
sectors
showed
a notable increase in its work population.
The
defence
sector
had the least
number
of
men
and
women
and
even though
there was a slight variation in the
number
of
women
the
number
of
men
in this
sector
remained the same in both the years. Manufacturing at 600 above
men
, 250
women
and public
sector
apart from the
defence
at 800 above
men
and 600 above
women
in a thousand workers had no significant
changes
in both the years whatsoever. Most
changes
had been in the communication, finance and wholesale
sectors
with a large increase in the
number
of
people
from 1975 to 1995 speak out in the volume of the interest of the
general public
towards these
sectors
. Communication and wholesale
sector
had
seen
a huge hike in the
number
of
women
even overtaking
men
in the process.
On these grounds, I conclude by saying the prominence of
women
in employment
sectors
in
Freedonia
is evident when we compare the graph of 1995 and 1975.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes