The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v.4
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v. 4
The line graphs illustrate the number of male and female workers in various employment sectors of the Republic of Fredonia in the year 1975 and 1995. The first point to note is that the highest number of male and female workers were occupied in the public sector and wholesale and retail trade sector in both years.
Public sector occupied the same number of employees in both two years that is 840 males and 640 females in a thousand employee. Wholesale and retail trade sector stands close behind with 650 male and 460 female employees in the year 1975, while a slight reverse order in the year 1995 with 800 females and 650 males per thousand. Manufacturing section consumes almost an equal number of employees in both years with 600 males and half of its females. Interestingly, almost an equal number of employees in communication sector in the year 1975 with 24% and 25% females and males respectively, changed to its double in female workers and with the same number of male workers in the year 1995. This same trend was shown in finance and banking sector. However, defence public sector occupied the lowest number with 10 female and 210 male workers out of a thousand workers in the year 1975 and 100 females and its double male workers in the year 1995.
In conclusion, it is clear from the graphs that, there are fluctuations in the number in both years. But male employees are more compared to females in almost all the sectors in the given years.
The line graphs illustrate the
number
of male and
female
workers
in various employment
sectors
of the Republic of
Fredonia
in the
year
1975 and 1995. The
first
point to note is that the highest
number
of male and
female
workers
were occupied
in the public
sector
and wholesale and retail trade
sector
in both years.
Public
sector
occupied the same
number
of
employees
in both two years
that is
840
males
and 640
females
in a thousand
employee
. Wholesale and retail trade
sector
stands close behind with 650 male and 460
female
employees
in the
year
1975, while a slight reverse order in the
year
1995 with 800
females
and 650
males
per thousand. Manufacturing section consumes almost an equal
number
of
employees
in both years with 600
males
and half of its
females
.
Interestingly
, almost an equal
number
of
employees
in communication
sector
in the
year
1975 with 24% and 25%
females
and
males
respectively
,
changed
to its double in
female
workers
and with the same
number
of male
workers
in the
year
1995. This same trend
was shown
in finance and banking
sector
.
However
,
defence
public
sector
occupied the lowest
number
with 10
female
and 210 male
workers
out of a thousand
workers
in the
year
1975 and 100
females
and its double male
workers
in the
year
1995.
In conclusion
, it is
clear
from the graphs that, there are fluctuations in the
number
in both years.
But
male
employees
are more compared to
females
in almost all the
sectors
in the
given
years.
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