The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v.3
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v. 3
The line graphs provide data on the workforce in six different professions in the Republic of Freedonia in 1975 and 1995. As is observed, the graphs illustrate the progress of empowering women in the work market over the twenty years, even the number of females exceeded the number of males in some work fields.
In 1975, the number of employed men was considerably higher compared to the number of women in all sectors, in particular, manufacturing, finance and banking and public sector (defence). By 1995 there was a significant increase in the number of working females in communication, finance and marketing and wholesale and retail trade, where the number of employed women in these sectors was around 250, 120 and 550 out of a thousand respectively and it rose by approximately 300 out of thousand in each sector. Taking into consideration the number of women surpassed the number of men in communication and wholesale and retail sectors, it is evident that women empowerment in employment sectors in Freedonia had significantly progressed in the given period.
The line graphs provide data on the workforce in six
different
professions in the Republic of
Freedonia
in 1975 and 1995. As
is observed
, the graphs illustrate the progress of empowering
women
in the work market over the twenty years, even the
number
of females exceeded the
number
of males in
some
work fields.
In 1975, the
number
of employed
men
was
considerably
higher compared to the
number
of
women
in all
sectors
,
in particular
, manufacturing, finance and banking and public
sector
(
defence
). By 1995 there was a significant increase in the
number
of working females in communication, finance and marketing and wholesale and retail trade, where the
number
of employed
women
in these
sectors
was around 250, 120 and 550 out of a thousand
respectively
and it rose by approximately 300 out of thousand in each
sector
. Taking into consideration the
number
of
women
surpassed the
number
of
men
in communication and wholesale and retail
sectors
, it is evident that
women
empowerment in employment
sectors
in
Freedonia
had
significantly
progressed in the
given
period.
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3Mistakes