The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v.10
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v. 10
The line graphs compare the number of male and female employees in every thousand in six sectors in Freedonia in 1975 and 1995. At a glance at the graph, it is clear that women advanced well in 20 years in Freedonia in terms of their involvements in different jobs.
As can be seen from the graphs, among all the sectors, non-defence public sector was the most popular working field for both the genders in 1975, in which, the number of males and females was around 900, 000 and 700, 000 respectively. Interestingly, the figures for both the genders in this sector remained the same even in1995, followed by wholesale and retail sector, where the rate of women employees was 570, 000 in1975 which rose to 800, 000 after 2 decades whereas the figures for their counterparts worked in the same sector stayed at a constant figure of 800, 000 throughout the period.
Likewise, in the field of manufacturing, the number of males and females had no change after 20 years from 700, 000 and 300, 000 respectively. Noticeably, the number of men occupied in the field of communication and banking /finance remained steady during the time period at 300, 000 and just over 400, 000 correspondingly; whilst the figures for female employees in communication sector underwent a threefold increase from about 300, 000 by 1995. Similarly, in the banking sector, women had a fourfold rise to almost 450, 000. It can be seen that only 25, 000 women worked in the defence/ public sector in1975, while the figures for men was more than 225, 000. However, the rate of the former rose by 4 times and reached 100, 000 after 20 years whereas the figures for the latter had a fall to 200, 000.
The line graphs compare the
number
of male and
female
employees in every thousand in six
sectors
in
Freedonia
in 1975 and 1995. At a glance at the graph, it is
clear
that
women
advanced well in 20 years in
Freedonia
in terms of their involvements in
different
jobs.
As can be
seen
from the graphs, among all the
sectors
,
non-defence
public
sector
was the most popular working field for both the genders in 1975, in which, the
number
of males and
females
was around 900, 000 and 700, 000
respectively
.
Interestingly
, the
figures
for both the genders in this
sector
remained the same even in1995, followed by wholesale and retail
sector
, where the rate of
women
employees was 570, 000 in1975 which rose to 800, 000 after 2 decades whereas the
figures
for their counterparts worked in the same
sector
stayed at a constant
figure
of 800, 000 throughout the period.
Likewise
, in the field of manufacturing, the
number
of males and
females
had no
change
after 20 years from 700, 000 and 300, 000
respectively
.
Noticeably
, the
number
of
men
occupied in the field of communication and banking /finance remained steady during the time period at 300, 000 and
just
over 400, 000
correspondingly
; whilst the
figures
for
female
employees in communication
sector
underwent a threefold increase from about 300, 000 by 1995.
Similarly
, in the banking
sector
,
women
had a fourfold rise to almost 450, 000. It can be
seen
that
only
25, 000
women
worked in the
defence
/ public
sector
in1975, while the
figures
for
men
was more than 225, 000.
However
, the rate of the former rose by 4 times and reached 100, 000 after 20 years whereas the
figures
for the latter had a fall to 200, 000.
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