The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v.2
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v. 2
The line graphs show the information about employment scenario in Fredonia by gender in six different employment sectors during 1975 and 1995. It is very clear from the overall trend that men were pretty much dominating the job markets both during 1975 and 1995, but women made progress in the given 20 years period.
According to the first graph that depicts the employment status in 1975, there were far more male employees in all the employment sectors than its opposite sex. Nearly half of the employees in the manufacturing industry were men. Most strikingly, 75% of financial sector employees were male. However, women appeared to be competing for shoulder to shoulder against their male counterpart in the communication sectors.
Turning to the 1995 data, females had made a significant improvement in securing jobs in different employment sectors. On top of that, women outmatched the male counterpart in securing jobs in communication and wholesale & retail trade industry. Furthermore, nearly half of the communication sector employees were women. In finance sector as well, women were not very far behind.
Comparing the two graphs, it seems very clear that in between those twenty years the number of male employees in these sectors had remained considerably the same, but there was a considerable increase of female employees in the majority of these job sectors.
The line graphs
show
the information about
employment
scenario in
Fredonia
by gender in six
different
employment
sectors
during 1975 and 1995. It is
very
clear
from the
overall
trend that
men
were pretty much dominating the
job
markets both during 1975 and 1995,
but
women
made progress in the
given
20 years period.
According to the
first
graph that depicts the
employment
status in 1975, there were far more male
employees
in all the
employment
sectors
than its opposite sex.
Nearly
half of the
employees
in the manufacturing industry were
men
. Most
strikingly
, 75% of financial
sector
employees
were male.
However
,
women
appeared to be competing for shoulder to shoulder against their male counterpart in the communication sectors.
Turning to the 1995 data, females had made a significant improvement in securing
jobs
in
different
employment
sectors
.
On top of that
,
women
outmatched the male counterpart in securing
jobs
in communication and wholesale & retail trade industry.
Furthermore
,
nearly
half of the communication
sector
employees
were
women
. In finance
sector
as well
,
women
were not
very
far behind.
Comparing the two graphs, it seems
very
clear
that in between those twenty years the number of male
employees
in these
sectors
had remained
considerably
the same,
but
there was a considerable increase of female
employees
in the majority of these
job
sectors
.
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