The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v.7
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. v. 7
The provided line graphs compare the number of male and female workers in 6 broad job sectors of Freedonia. As is presented in the two line graphs, women have made a significant improvement in Freedonian job sectors over the 20 years.
Initially, in 1975, men were ahead in all job sectors than women. In manufacturing job fields, around 220 women were employed while the number of male employees was well over 600 per thousand. Men were ahead of women in terms of their involvement in jobs in all of the mentioned 6 broad sectors. In Finance/ Banking, wholesale & retail trade, non-defense public sector, women were far more behind than their male counterpart. Only in communications sector women were close to men. Among 1000 employees in defence public sector women were less than 50 where men were around 250. The first graph thus depicts the men and women workforce in Freedonia in 1975.
But after 20 years in 1995, the scenario had changed significantly. Women crossed men in terms of their job involvement in communication and wholesale & retail trade. In defence, the number of women workers doubled that the number of 1975, whereas the number of men had decreased to 200. In non-defence sector, the differences had not changed that much but in communications and Finance/ Banking sector women have done significant improvement compared to their number 20 years back.
In summary, women in Freedonia had done a remarkable progress in job sectors and in some cases had superseded their male counterparts.
The provided line graphs compare the
number
of male and female workers in 6 broad
job
sectors
of
Freedonia
. As
is presented
in the two line graphs,
women
have made a significant improvement in
Freedonian
job
sectors
over the 20 years.
Initially
, in 1975,
men
were ahead in all
job
sectors
than
women
. In manufacturing
job
fields, around 220
women
were employed
while the
number
of male employees was well over 600 per thousand.
Men
were ahead of
women
in terms of their involvement in
jobs
in
all of the
mentioned 6 broad
sectors
. In Finance/ Banking, wholesale & retail trade, non-defense public
sector
,
women
were far more behind than their male counterpart.
Only
in communications
sector
women
were close to
men
. Among 1000 employees in
defence
public
sector
women
were less than 50 where
men
were around 250. The
first
graph
thus
depicts the
men
and
women
workforce in
Freedonia
in 1975.
But
after 20 years in 1995, the scenario had
changed
significantly
.
Women
crossed
men
in terms of their
job
involvement in communication and wholesale & retail trade. In
defence
, the
number
of
women
workers doubled that the
number
of 1975, whereas the
number
of
men
had decreased to 200. In
non-defence
sector
, the differences had not
changed
that much
but
in communications and Finance/ Banking
sector
women
have done significant improvement compared to their
number
20 years back.
In
summary,
women
in
Freedonia
had done
a remarkable progress
in
job
sectors
and in
some
cases had superseded their male counterparts.
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