The provided illustrations compare the male and female workers in different employment sectors in Freedonia over 20 years of time by providing data for the years 1975 and 1995. As is observed from the given line graphs, women were far behind in employment in Freedonia in 1975 but within 20 years they made remarkable progress almost in all sectors and went well ahead of men in communications and wholesale & retail trade sectors.
The graphs compare the number of male and female workers in 6 different sectors of Freedonia per thousand. In 1975, more men than women were employed in almost all the mentioned sectors of job categories. For instance, approximately 650 men were employed in manufacturing-related jobs compared to only 300 women per thousand of total employees in the same sectors. In almost all other cases, the numbers of male employees were much higher than the women and in communication sectors men were a bit ahead than female in their employment ration. After 20 years, in 1995, women made outstanding progress in Freedonian job sectors. For instance, in communication sectors, almost 600 female were employed compared to 300 male workers per thousand. Women went ahead of men in wholesale & retail trade sectors too. Except for the public sectors (non-defence) women hold the trends of progress compared to men in all other sectors. In 1975 only about 40 women worked in defence sectors and this number grew to more than 100 per thousand after 20 years.
In summary, women did remarkable progress in Freedonian job fields over 20 years and they went ahead of men in many job sectors.
The provided illustrations compare the male and
female
workers in
different
employment
sectors
in
Freedonia
over 20 years of time by providing data for the years 1975 and 1995. As
is observed
from the
given
line graphs,
women
were far behind in employment in
Freedonia
in 1975
but
within 20 years they made remarkable
progress
almost
in all
sectors
and went well
ahead
of
men
in communications and wholesale & retail trade sectors.
The graphs compare the number of male and
female
workers in 6
different
sectors
of
Freedonia
per thousand. In 1975, more
men
than
women
were employed
in
almost
all the mentioned
sectors
of
job
categories.
For instance
, approximately 650
men
were employed
in manufacturing-related
jobs
compared to
only
300
women
per thousand of total employees in the same
sectors
. In
almost
all other cases, the numbers of male employees were much higher than the
women
and in communication
sectors
men
were a bit
ahead
than
female
in their employment ration. After 20 years, in 1995,
women
made outstanding
progress
in
Freedonian
job
sectors
.
For instance
, in communication
sectors
,
almost
600
female
were employed
compared to 300 male workers per thousand.
Women
went
ahead
of
men
in wholesale & retail trade
sectors
too.
Except for
the public
sectors
(
non-defence
)
women
hold the trends of
progress
compared to
men
in all other
sectors
. In 1975
only
about 40
women
worked in
defence
sectors
and this number grew to more than 100 per thousand after 20 years.
In summary,
women
did remarkable
progress
in
Freedonian
job
fields over 20
years and
they went
ahead
of
men
in
many
job
sectors
.
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