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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. v.1

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. v. 1
The line chart illustrates data on the ratio of vegetarian teenagers in the UK between 1960 and 2020. As is observed from the graph, the ratio of UK adolescents with a vegetarian diet increased dramatically between 1960 and 1970 and despite a significant drop after the '80s, these days a good percentage of young British follows a vegetarian diet. From 1960 to 1980, the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet increased modestly to nearly 15% in 1980, which was the highest proportion of young vegetarian in the UK. There was a dramatic dip, followed by a moderate rise afterwards. As is presented from the graph, after culminating the vertex in 1980, there was a decrease over the next 20 years. Since then it increased progressively. From 1990 to 2000, this ratio fluctuated and touched the lowest point in this period with just over 3% UK youth vegetarians. It is seen from the data that after some fluctuations, the percentage of teenage vegetarian dieters increased gradually until 2010 and it remained almost the same over the next decade. Finally, in 2020, almost 13% of youths in Britain follow vegetarian diets.
The line chart illustrates data on the ratio of vegetarian
teenagers
in the UK between 1960 and 2020. As
is observed
from the graph, the ratio of UK adolescents with a vegetarian diet
increased
dramatically
between 1960 and 1970 and despite a significant drop after the '80s, these days a
good
percentage of young British follows a vegetarian diet.

From 1960 to 1980, the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet
increased
modestly
to
nearly
15% in 1980, which was the highest proportion of young vegetarian in the UK. There was a dramatic dip, followed by a moderate rise afterwards. As
is presented
from the graph, after culminating the vertex in 1980, there was a decrease over the
next
20 years. Since
then it
increased
progressively
. From 1990 to 2000, this ratio fluctuated and touched the lowest point in this period with
just
over 3% UK youth vegetarians. It is
seen
from the data that after
some
fluctuations, the percentage of teenage vegetarian dieters
increased
gradually
until 2010 and it remained almost the same over the
next
decade.
Finally
, in 2020, almost 13% of youths in Britain follow vegetarian diets.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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