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The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. v.1

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. v. 1
The pie charts compare the population distribution in different regions of the world in 1910 and 2010 and also depicts the changes in global population in these territories. A glance at the diagrams reveals that more than half of the world citizens resided in Asia, both in 1910 and 2010, and the ratio of the global population division decreased in Asia and Europe in a century. According to the given illustration, in 1910, the global inhabitants was 1. 7 billion which overwhelmingly increased and reached to 6 billion in just 100 years. Six out of every ten persons, in 1910, lived in Asia, making it the region with exactly 60% global people. Then Europe and Russia comprised one-fourth of the global citizenry while 3% and 5% of the global community lived in Latin America and North America. Finally, the lowest percentage of the population allotment could be observed in Latin America and African region had one and a half percent more citizen share in this year. After a century, 2010, to be exact, the population diffusion in different parts of the world changes. More than half of the world population were in Asia, though it is precisely six percent fewer than that of a century back. North America's percentages of the population remained unchanged but made it the continent with the lowest percentage of the world population which was previously held by the Latin America. Interestingly, population distribution in Europe and Russia dropped to almost half while it more than doubled in Latin America and Africa. Finally, six percent people lived in the Middle East and North Africa in 2010 though no data was given for this region explicitly in the first pie chart.
The pie charts compare the
population
distribution in
different
regions
of the
world
in 1910 and 2010 and
also
depicts the
changes
in
global
population
in these territories. A glance at the diagrams reveals that more than
half
of the
world
citizens resided in Asia, both in 1910 and 2010, and the ratio of the
global
population
division decreased in Asia and Europe in a century.

According to the
given
illustration, in 1910, the
global
inhabitants was 1. 7 billion which
overwhelmingly
increased and reached to 6 billion in
just
100 years. Six out of every ten persons, in 1910,
lived
in Asia, making it the
region
with exactly 60%
global
people
. Then Europe and Russia comprised one-fourth of the
global
citizenry while 3% and 5% of the
global
community
lived
in
Latin
America and North America.
Finally
, the lowest percentage of the
population
allotment could
be observed
in
Latin
America and African
region
had one and a
half
percent more citizen share in this year.

After a century, 2010, to be exact, the
population
diffusion in
different
parts of the
world
changes
. More than
half
of the
world
population
were in Asia, though it is
precisely
six percent fewer than that of a century back. North America's percentages of the
population
remained unchanged
but
made it the continent with the lowest percentage of the
world
population
which was previously held by the
Latin
America.
Interestingly
,
population
distribution in Europe and Russia dropped to almost
half
while it more than doubled in
Latin
America and Africa.
Finally
, six percent
people
lived
in the Middle East and North Africa in 2010 though no data was
given
for this
region
explicitly
in the
first
pie chart.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. v. 1

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