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The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. v.1

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. v. 1
The line graph gives data on the proportion of children with respects to the total young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001. The proportion of children are categories in four age groups. Overall, the ratio of infants, between 0 to 4 years old, declined over the period while 10 to 14 years youngsters’ percentage increased in the UK. As can be seen in the diagram, just over a quarter of the UK children was 15 to 19 years old in 1990 while a similar proportion was 0 to 4 years old at that time. Just over 24% of young British were between 5 to 9 years old while 23% of them were 10 to 14 years old. With an increase from 1990 to 1992, the proportion of infants kept on decreasing and in 2001 accounted for over 23% of total youth. With a steady slump till 1996, 15-19 years old constituted a quarter of young British in 2001. Moving further, 10-14 years British dominated the young generation in the UK with a steady increase in their percentage in later years despite their least proportion in early years. Finally, 5-9 years British children were over 26% during 1995-1997 but their ratio declined and finally stood at just over 25% in 2001.
The line graph gives data on the
proportion
of
children
with respects to the total
young
population in the UK between 1990 and 2001. The
proportion
of
children
are
categories in four age groups.
Overall
, the ratio of infants,
between 0 to 4
years
old
, declined
over
the period while 10 to 14 years youngsters’ percentage increased in the UK.

As can be
seen
in the diagram,
just
over
a quarter of the UK
children
was 15 to 19 years
old
in 1990 while a similar
proportion
was 0 to 4 years
old
at that time.
Just
over
24% of
young
British were
between 5 to 9
years
old
while 23% of them were 10 to 14 years
old
. With an increase from 1990 to 1992, the
proportion
of infants
kept
on decreasing and in 2001 accounted for
over
23% of total youth. With a steady slump till 1996, 15-19 years
old
constituted a quarter of
young
British in 2001.

Moving
further
, 10-14 years British dominated the
young
generation in the UK with a steady increase in their percentage in later years despite their least
proportion
in early years.
Finally
, 5-9 years British
children
were
over
26% during 1995-1997
but
their ratio declined and
finally
stood at
just
over
25% in 2001.
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25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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