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The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. v.1

The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. v. 1
The bar graph reveals the number of internet users in June 2017 in nine different countries in the Middle East. As a general trend, Iran and Saudi Arabia had far more internet users than that of the remaining countries. According to the diagram, among the Middle-Eastern countries, Iran had the highest number of internet users in June 2017 which was well over 56 million. With exactly 24. 15 million internet users, Saudi Arabia stood at the second position in the list. Besides, 14 million Iranians were connected to this digital world which was significantly fewer than that of Iranian and Saudi Arabian internet users, but notably higher than that of most other Arab countries. Interestingly, Yemen, Israel, Jordan and Syria had a similar number of internet subscribers that ranges from approximately 6 to 7 million. Finally, in the United Arab Emirates, just over 8. 5 million citizens had access to the internet in June 2017 and the lowest number of internet users in a country was from Lebanon, where fewer than 5 million people had access to the internet technology.
The bar graph reveals the
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in June 2017 in nine
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in the Middle East. As a general trend, Iran and Saudi Arabia had far more internet
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than that of the remaining countries.

According to the diagram, among the Middle-Eastern
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, Iran had the highest
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of internet
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in June 2017 which was well over 56
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. With exactly 24. 15
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internet
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, Saudi Arabia stood at the second position in the list.
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Iranians
were connected
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,
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higher than that of most other Arab
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.
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, Yemen, Israel, Jordan and Syria had a similar
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of internet subscribers that ranges from approximately 6 to 7
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.
Finally
, in the United Arab Emirates,
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over 8. 5
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citizens had access to the internet in June 2017 and the lowest
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in a
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was from Lebanon, where fewer than 5
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had access to the internet technology.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017. v. 1

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