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The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Refer o v.2

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005
The graph illustrates the overall value of exports and the fuel, food and the produced products exported by one nation from 2000 to 2005. Let us take a closer look at the value of fuel exports that earned 300, 000 million dollars by 2000. Although, its started to declined by 2001 having the sales of 260, 000 million dollars. Followed by another slumped by 2002. On the other hand, it recovered and started to rose consistently by 2003 to 2005. Turning to the value of selected exports. Fuel dropped approximately from 45, 000 million dollars by 2000 to 20, 000 million dollars by 2005. However, manufactured goods shows a dramatic rise in 2000 to 2001 in which later achieved a plateau by 2002, but it gradually plumped by 2003. Then rose up again by 2004 to 2005. In addition, food presents a slight dropped from 2000 to 2001, but remained stable from 2002 to 2005. In summary, the value of fuel exports showed a great difference in terms of earnings from year 2000 to 2005. Followed by the fluctuation of value in manufactured goods while food remained stable in its value from year 2000 to 2005.
The graph illustrates the
overall
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of
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exports
and the
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fuel
, food and the produced products exported by one nation from 2000 to 2005.

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Let
us take a closer look at the
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value
of
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fuel
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exports
that earned 300, 000
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million
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dollars
by 2000. Although, its
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started
to declined by 2001 having the sales of 260, 000
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million
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. Followed by another slumped by 2002.
On the other hand
, it recovered and
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started
to rose
consistently
by 2003 to 2005.

Turning to the
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value
of selected
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exports
.
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Fuel
dropped approximately from 45, 000
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million
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dollars
by 2000 to 20, 000
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million
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dollars
by 2005.
However
, manufactured
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goods
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shows
a dramatic rise in 2000 to 2001 in which later achieved a plateau by 2002,
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but
it
gradually
plumped by 2003. Then rose up again by 2004 to 2005.
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, food presents a slight dropped from 2000 to 2001,
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but
remained stable from 2002 to 2005.

In summary, the
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value
of
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fuel
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exports
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showed
a great difference in terms of earnings from year 2000 to 2005. Followed by the fluctuation of
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value
in manufactured
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goods
while food remained stable in its
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value
from year 2000 to 2005.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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