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The chart below gives information about Someland s main exports in 2005 2015 and future projections for 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The chart below gives information about Someland s main exports in 2005 2015 and future projections for 2025
The bar chart illustrates someland’s main exports three different products meat, dairy, international tourism in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025. Overall, tourism was the highest export product in 2005, dairy products was the highest export products in someland’s in resent time but in future it will go down, international truism take over and got the highest amount of money. It is clear that over the time meat products exports will be decreased than 2005 level. According to the bar chat, international tourism was the highest point at 2005 it got almost 6. 2 billion USD. Over the time it increases in 2015 it was approximately 6. 8 billion and in future it will be raised at almost 8 billion USD. But dairy products was climbed most in 2005 to 2015 almost 3 billion, in 2005 it was 5 billion and 2015 it was almost 8 billion, but in 2025 it will be reduced a little (approximately 0. 5 billion). In the case of meat products, it declined over the time period in 2005 it was 4 billion and it decreased chronologically in 2015 it was 3. 5 billion, in future 2015 it will be 3 billion.
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meat, dairy, international tourism in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025.

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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about Someland s main exports in 2005 2015 and future projections for 2025

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