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The graph below shows the student involvement in three sports in a school based on which grades they are studying in. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.4

The graph below shows the student involvement in three sports in a school based on which grades they are studying in.
The provided column graph illustrates the engagement of students in three distinct sports during their study. The vertical axis represents the proportion of pupils in divergent sports and the horizontal axis indicates about the eight to ten grades in a school. Turning to class eight grader, near about 60% students have great interest to play a cricket game as compare to others but when it comes to the cricket and basketball, both the sports are approximately played constant just only with the difference of 5%. Furthermore, in the ninth class, 45% students are in the favor of cricket and this is 15% higher than the soccer players as well as the least difference of 20% can be clearly seen in the basketball sport. Finally, grade ten students show their less interest to play basketball sport and the cricket sport is highly considerable by 40% tenth graders. Overall, it is evident that the cricket is the favorite sport among all the graders while the basketball has less significance than other sports.
The provided column graph illustrates the engagement of
students
in three distinct
sports
during their study. The vertical axis represents the proportion of pupils in divergent
sports
and the horizontal axis indicates about the eight to ten grades in a school.

Turning to
class
eight grader, near about 60%
students
have great interest to play a
cricket
game as compare to others
but
when it
comes
to the
cricket
and
basketball
, both the
sports
are approximately played constant
just
only
with the difference of 5%.
Furthermore
, in the ninth
class
, 45%
students
are in the favor of
cricket
and this is 15% higher than the soccer players
as well
as the least difference of 20% can be
clearly
seen
in the
basketball
sport.

Finally
, grade ten
students
show
their less interest to play
basketball
sport
and the
cricket
sport
is
highly
considerable by 40% tenth graders.

Overall
, it is evident that the
cricket
is the favorite
sport
among all the graders while the
basketball
has less significance than other
sports
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the student involvement in three sports in a school based on which grades they are studying in.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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