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The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total enrgy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total enrgy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010
A glance at the graph provide reveal the percentage of renewable energy in total energy supply in Australia, Sweden, Iceland, Turkey between 1997 and 2010. Overall, it is evident that Iceland and Sweden witnessed a increase while Turkey and Australia saw the opposite trend. Looking more details, the figure in Iceland was far more higher than any countries listed which is cited by approximately 50 percents in 1997, then rose up to 60 percents 2000 and increased to 70 percents in 2010. Similar to Iceland was Sweden. The proportion started at somewhere at the vincinity of 10 percents, climbed up higher and ended at nearly 10 percent in 1997, 2000, 2010 respectively. In stark of contrast, Turkey and Australia saw a decrease. In Turkey, the data fluctuated, from 40 percents in 1997, it slightly increased to over 40 percents which plumped to 30 percents in the next 10 years. Austraila was follwed by with nearly 10 percents in 1997, gradually fell to just half of 10 percents in 2000 and 2010.
A glance at the graph provide reveal the percentage of renewable energy in total energy supply in Australia, Sweden, Iceland, Turkey between 1997 and 2010.

Overall
, it is evident that Iceland and Sweden witnessed
a
increase while Turkey and Australia
saw
the opposite trend.

Looking more
details
, the figure in Iceland was far
more higher
than any countries listed which
is cited
by approximately 50
percents
in 1997, then rose up to 60
percents
2000 and increased to 70
percents
in 2010. Similar to Iceland was Sweden. The proportion
started
at somewhere at the
vincinity
of 10
percents
, climbed up higher and ended at
nearly
10
percent
in 1997, 2000, 2010
respectively
.

In stark of contrast, Turkey and Australia
saw
a decrease. In Turkey, the data fluctuated, from 40
percents
in 1997, it
slightly
increased to over 40
percents
which plumped to 30
percents
in the
next
10 years.
Austraila
was
follwed
by with
nearly
10
percents
in 1997,
gradually
fell to
just
half of 10
percents
in 2000 and 2010.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total enrgy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010

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