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The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010
The given bar chart presents data about the percentages of renewable energy concerning the total energy production in four different countries (Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey) in three years; 1997, 2000 and 2010. Overall, Sweden and Iceland witnessed an upward trend in the use of renewable energy sources in the three examined years. It can also be seen that among the four countries, this type of energy was most popular in Iceland. In 1997, almost half of the total energy produced in Iceland came from renewable resources. This figure continued to climb steadily to 60% in 2000 and more than 70% in 2010. Experiencing a similar trend to that of Iceland in terms of the proportion of renewable energy produced, the figure for renewable energy sources in Sweden increased from 5% in 1997 to almost 10% at the end of the period. Regarding Australia, nearly 10% of the energy supply was from renewable resources in 1997, and this figure decreased slightly to around 5% in 2010. Similarly, the percentage of renewable energy used in Turkey saw a decline over the years from approximately 37% in 1997 to just under 35% in 2010.
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bar chart presents data about the percentages of
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renewable
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energy
concerning the total
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energy
production in four
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countries (Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey) in three years; 1997, 2000 and 2010.

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, Sweden and Iceland witnessed an upward trend in the
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use
of
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renewable
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energy
sources in the three examined years. It can
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seen
that among the four countries, this type of
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energy
was most popular in Iceland.

In 1997, almost half of the total
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energy
produced in Iceland came from
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renewable
resources. This figure continued to climb
steadily
to 60% in 2000 and more than 70% in 2010. Experiencing a similar trend to that of Iceland in terms of the proportion of
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renewable
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energy
produced, the figure for
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renewable
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sources in Sweden increased from 5% in 1997 to almost 10% at the
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end
of the period.

Regarding Australia,
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10% of the
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energy
supply was from
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renewable
resources in 1997, and this figure decreased
slightly
to around 5% in 2010.
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, the percentage of
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renewable
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energy
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used
in Turkey
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a decline over the years from approximately 37% in 1997 to
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under 35% in 2010.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010

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