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the chart below show the percentage of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000 Summarise and information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant v.2

the chart below show the percentage of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000 Summarise and information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant v. 2
The given column charts compare the rate of different gender students who achieved top marks in 1960 and 2000. Overall, it can be seen from graph that percentage of top scorers in different subject by girls were decrease moderately while this ratios were fluctuated for males; except only for Language for boys and maths for females remained unchanged. In 1960, approximately 30 per cent males scored good grade in science and maths, whereas in language and humanities accounted for just above a fifth. Only one in ten scored high in arts. In contrast, girls did much better in language and humanities and arts, which made up 45%, around a third and 30% scoring high in these subject respectively. Only 10% girls succeed in science and the least scored high in maths, at 5% merely. In 2000, among boys, the percentage of top scorers in arts and humanities almost double whereas in science and maths became approximately half as compare to the figure of 1960. The number of girls who got good scorers after 40 years in arts, language and humanities were a significant decreased, which constituted a little more than 30% for languages and approximately a quarter for arts and humanities.
The
given
column charts compare the rate of
different
gender students who achieved top marks in 1960 and 2000.

Overall
, it can be
seen
from graph that percentage of top scorers in
different
subject by
girls
were decrease
moderately
while
this
ratios
were fluctuated
for males; except
only
for
Language
for boys and
maths
for females remained unchanged.

In 1960, approximately 30 per cent males scored
good
grade in science and
maths
, whereas in
language
and humanities accounted for
just
above a fifth.
Only
one in ten scored high in
arts
.
In contrast
,
girls
did much better in
language
and humanities and
arts
, which made up 45%, around a third and 30% scoring high in these subject
respectively
.
Only
10%
girls
succeed in science and the least scored high in
maths
, at 5%
merely
.

In 2000, among boys, the percentage of top scorers in
arts
and humanities almost double whereas in science and
maths
became approximately half as compare to the figure of 1960. The number of
girls
who
got
good
scorers after 40 years in
arts
,
language
and humanities were a significant decreased, which constituted a
little
more than 30% for
languages
and approximately a quarter for
arts
and humanities.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic the chart below show the percentage of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000 Summarise and information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant v. 2

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