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the graph below shows the populations in India and China since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth until 2050 v.2

the graph below shows the populations in India and China since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth until 2050 v. 2
The line graph gives information about the population rise in India and China from the year 2000. Predictions for population growth until the year 2050 are also given. Overall, there is a steady rise in the Indian population during the period. Whereas, The Chinese population also increases steadily for some time but it is projected to decline in the future. In 2000, India had a population of 1 billion whereas the Chinese population was between 1. 2 and 1. 3 billion. The population of India rose dramatically over the next 10 years and almost hit 1. 2 billion by 2010. During the same period, the Chinese population also grew by 100 million. By 2030, it is estimated that the population of both countries will be equal. The Indian population is expected to grow afterward while the Chinese population is projected to decline. The total population of India is expected to reach 1. 6 billion by 2050. Furthermore, The Chinese population is expected to hit its peak value of 1. 45 billion by 2025 and then after it would reportedly decline and reach 1. 4 billion in 2050.
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rise in India and China from the year 2000. Predictions for
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population
growth until the year 2050 are
also
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.
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during the period. Whereas, The Chinese
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also
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steadily
for
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of 1
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whereas the Chinese
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was between 1. 2 and 1. 3
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. The
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of India rose
dramatically
over the
next
10 years and almost hit 1. 2
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billion
by 2010. During the same period, the Chinese
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population
also
grew by 100 million. By 2030, it
is estimated
that the
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population
of both countries will be equal. The Indian
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is
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expected
to grow afterward while the Chinese
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is projected
to decline.

The total
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of India is
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to reach 1. 6
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by 2050.
Furthermore
, The Chinese
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is
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expected
to hit its peak value of 1. 45
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billion
by 2025 and then after it would reportedly decline and reach 1. 4
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billion
in 2050.
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the populations in India and China since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth until 2050 v. 2

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