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You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it v.5

You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it v. 5
2-feb-2019, chirala. To, The library, St. Ann' s college of engineering and technology, chirala. Respected sir, I am Jagarlamudi Lakshmi Prasanna bearing hallticket number 14F01A0476. I am studying in the stream of Electronics and communication engineering. As I take a book from library on last month. The due date of my book had completed. But I have not submitted the book due to the sick of my relatives. so I went to their house for sewing them. so I am not able to refer that book so that I am not able to send the book. so I request you to give some time for my preparation and I can send that book after completion of my preparation please accept my mistake and I hope that you can understand my problem and gave me permission. Sorry for the late submission and I promise you that I can' t repeat this mistake again. Thanking you sir, Yours obediently, Lakshmi prasanna.
2-feb-2019,

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chirala
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To,

The library,

St.
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Ann&
#039; s college of engineering and technology,

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chirala
.

Respected sir,

I am
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Jagarlamudi
Lakshmi
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Prasanna
bearing
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hallticket
number 14F01A0476. I am studying in the stream of Electronics and communication engineering.

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As
I take a
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book
from library on last month. The due date of my
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book
had completed.
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But
I have not submitted the
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book
due to the sick of my relatives.
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so
I went to their
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house
for sewing them.
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so
I am not able to refer that
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book
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so
that I am not able to
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send
the book.

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so
I request you to give
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some
time for my preparation and I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
that
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book
after completion of my preparation
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please
accept my mistake and I hope that you can understand my problem and gave me permission.

Sorry for the late submission and I promise you that I
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can&
#039; t repeat this mistake again.

Thanking you sir,

Yours
obediently
,

Lakshmi
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prasanna
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes
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IELTS academic You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it v. 5

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  American English
14 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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