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The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040 v.2

The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040 v. 2
The line chart illustrates the population of a specific nation followed by age group beginning in 1960 and prediction to 2040. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that people aged 15-64 years old accounted for the greatest percentage of the population for all recorded and predicted years. Additionally, population ageing had been happening in this country. In 1960, about 55% of the total residents came from to age group between 15 and 64. The figure then slightly fluctuated over the next thirty years before dropping strongly to 50% in 2020 and will be predicted continuously falling to around 45% in 2040. Meanwhile, the proportion of citizens aged 0-14 stood at 30% in 1996 and experienced a downward nonstop trend excepting the period from 1970 to 1980 to just over 10% in 2020. After that, the figure is foretold to go down to almost 10% in 2040. Regarding the oldest age group, although the rate of people was aged 65 or above stayed unchanged between 1960 and 1970 at about 15%, however ever since, the number increased to roughly 35% in 2020 and is guessed to continue rising in the future.
The line chart illustrates the population of a specific nation followed by age group beginning in 1960 and prediction to 2040.

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that
people
aged 15-64 years
old
accounted for the greatest percentage of the population for all recorded and predicted years.
Additionally
, population
ageing
had been happening in this country.

In 1960, about 55% of the total residents came from to age group between 15 and 64. The figure then
slightly
fluctuated over the
next
thirty years
before
dropping
strongly
to 50% in 2020 and will
be predicted
continuously
falling to around 45% in 2040. Meanwhile, the proportion of citizens aged 0-14 stood at 30% in 1996 and experienced a downward nonstop trend excepting the period from 1970 to 1980 to
just
over 10% in 2020. After that, the figure is foretold to go down to almost 10% in 2040.

Regarding the oldest age group, although the rate of
people
was aged
65 or above stayed unchanged between 1960 and 1970 at about 15%,
however
ever since, the number increased to roughly 35% in 2020 and
is guessed
to continue rising in the future.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040 v. 2

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4 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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