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The graph below shows the percentage sales of trainers made by a sportwear company in one year. The Flying Boots trainers were lunched at the beginning of that year. v.1

The graph below shows the percentage sales of trainers made by a sportwear company in one year. The Flying Boots trainers were lunched at the beginning of that year. v. 1
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015. It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably. In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne. From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.
The line graph compares three
companies
in terms of their
waste
output
between the years 2000 and 2015.

It is
clear
that there were significant
changes
in the amounts of
waste
produced
by all three
companies
shown on the graph. While
companies
A and B
saw
waste
output
fall over the
15-year
period, the amount of
waste
produced
by
company
C increased
considerably
.

In 2000,
company
A
produced
12 tonnes of
waste
, while
companies
B and C
produced
around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of
waste
material
respectively
. Over the following 5 years, the
waste
output
of
companies
B and C rose by around 2 tonnes,
but
the figure for
company
A fell by approximately 1 tonne.

From 2005 to 2015,
company
A
cut
waste
production by roughly 3 tonnes, and
company
B
reduced
its
waste
by around 7 tonnes. By contrast,
company
C
saw
an increase in
waste
production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same
10-year
period. By 2015,
company
C’s
waste
output
had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of
waste
from
companies
A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and
only
3 tonnes.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage sales of trainers made by a sportwear company in one year. The Flying Boots trainers were lunched at the beginning of that year. v. 1

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