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The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 v.3

The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 v. 3
The bar chart compares to the proportion of city and country side residence with had a web-enabled in a European region from 1999 to 2004. Overall, it is clearly seen that, the highest percentage of households which had internet access was urban area during the period. In addition to the that, people living in provinces had a web-enabled increased until the whole years. In the beginning of the time slot, (in 1999) while approximately 15% civic had an internet access. In 2000, the per cent of accessing of internet in town remained twice as high as in 1999 with 30%. Despite the dramatic rose in the last 3 years, the number of users increased significantly until the 2004. On the other hand, less than 3% rural used internet in 1999. Over the next 5 years, internet access in rural families continued to increase considerably. Between 2000 and 2004, the proportion of rural users grew from almost 5% to nearly 35%.
The bar chart compares to the proportion of city and country side residence with had a web-enabled in a European region from 1999 to 2004.
Overall
, it is
clearly
seen
that, the highest percentage of households which had internet access was urban area during the period.
In addition
to the that,
people
living in provinces had a web-enabled increased until the whole years.

In the beginning of the time slot, (in 1999) while approximately 15% civic had an internet access.
In
2000, the per cent of accessing of internet in town remained twice as high as in 1999 with 30%. Despite the dramatic rose in the last 3 years, the number of users increased
significantly
until the 2004.

On the other hand
, less than 3% rural
used
internet in 1999. Over the
next
5 years, internet access in rural families continued to increase
considerably
. Between 2000 and 2004, the proportion of rural users grew from almost 5% to
nearly
35%.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 v. 3

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