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The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses.
The diagram given clearly depicts the various stages in recycling of plastic bottles and then its usage in new forms. The plastic bottles are collected in the recycling centre and are then segregated from other types of materials like glass and metal. Then the bottles are categorised according to specific colours. Later on, almost 7, 000 plastic bottles are tied into each separate bundles and then these bales are pressed. These bales are then carried to reclaimer, where they are broken with the help of bale breaker. After breaking, the plastics are formed into small pieces like flakes. Flakes are then washed, rinsed and finally dried. These flakes are then melted and passed through extruder. Thus the pellets are formed. The pellets thus produced are then sold out to the producers, which they use to make various products like fibres for carpets and clothing, non food containers and other products. To summarise the whole process is divided into two major parts one in the recycling center and the other in reclaimer. In recycling center plastic bottles are sorted and bales are made, while in reclaimer the plastic bottles are crushed and flakes are used to make pellets.
The diagram
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given
clearly
depicts the various stages in
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recycling
of
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plastic
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bottles
and then its usage in new forms. The
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plastic
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bottles
are collected
in the
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recycling
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centre
and are then segregated from other types of materials like glass and metal. Then the
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bottles
are
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categorised
according to specific
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colours
. Later on, almost 7, 000
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plastic
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bottles
are tied
into each separate bundles and then these
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bales
are pressed
. These
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bales
are then carried to reclaimer, where they
are broken
with the
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help
of
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bale
breaker. After breaking, the
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plastics
are formed
into
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small
pieces like
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flakes
.
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Flakes
are then washed, rinsed and
finally
dried. These
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flakes
are then melted and passed through extruder.
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Thus
the pellets
are formed
.

The pellets
thus
produced are then sold out to the producers, which they
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use to
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make
various products like
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fibres
for carpets and clothing,
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non food
containers and other products.

To
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summarise
the whole process
is divided
into two major parts one in the
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recycling
center and the other in reclaimer. In
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recycling
center
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plastic
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bottles
are sorted
and
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bales
are made
, while in reclaimer the
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plastic
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bottles
are crushed
and
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flakes
are
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used
to
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make
pellets.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS academic The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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