The graph below shows the percentage of people who travelled by bus in the UK from 2009 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2
The graph below shows the percentage of people who travelled by bus in the UK from 2009 to 2011.
The rendered bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who used the bus for travelling for various purposes in the britain between 2009 and 2011.
From the overall analysis, it is manifest that the most preferred mode for going shopping, while the least preferred mode for going to work.
At the fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that shopping accounted for 65% and 56% of the number of people used bus in the first two years respectively, subsequent to which the percentage further fell down to 51% in the 2011. In contrast, the figure for work for the year 2009, 2010, 2011 were recorded to be merely 5%, 2%, 0%, which happened to be the least.
Probing further, using bus for study purpose stood at 4% in 2009 as against 9% in the following two years. As regards visiting friends, stagnating to just under a fifth(19%) from 2009 to 2010, the percentage of masses rose by 4% in the last year. In 2009, 7% people used bus for day tour, after that this number remained stable in the given two years.
The rendered bar chart illustrates the proportion of
people
who
used
the bus for travelling for various purposes in the
britain
between 2009 and 2011.
From the
overall
analysis, it is manifest that the most preferred mode for going shopping, while the least preferred mode for going to work.
At the fleeting glance, it is
immensely
clear
that shopping accounted for 65% and 56% of the number of
people
used
bus in the
first
two years
respectively
,
subsequent to
which the percentage
further
fell down to 51% in the 2011.
In contrast
, the figure for work for the
year
2009, 2010, 2011
were recorded
to be
merely
5%, 2%, 0%, which happened to be the least.
Probing
further
, using bus for study purpose stood at 4% in 2009 as against 9% in the following two years. As regards visiting friends, stagnating to
just
under a fifth(19%) from 2009 to 2010, the percentage of masses rose by 4% in the last
year
. In 2009, 7%
people
used
bus for day tour, after that this number remained stable in the
given
two years.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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