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The flowchart below shows the process of making recycled bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The flowchart below shows the process of making recycled bottles.
The picture below illustrates the steps on how to recycle used bottles. The procedures begin with the collection of bottles, and then being imported back to supermarkets. First, used bottles will be collected at a collection point, such as waste zones. Then, with the power from high-pressure water, all the bottle is cleaned and ready to go to the recycling section. At the recycling plant, each type of bottle is divided into three main categories: the transparent one, the green and the brown one. Three different types come with three different factories to recycle specific bottles. In the chart, the process to recycle is unknown. After leaving the factory, they will be transferred to a furnace, then get melted to become liquid glass. Together with new liquid glass comes from other sources, the shape of the bottle is defined depends on the shape of the mould. Lastly, a transport vehicle will bring the bottle back to the customers’ supermarkets for consuming purpose.
The picture below illustrates the steps on how to recycle
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used
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bottles
. The procedures
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begin
with the collection of
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bottles
, and then
being imported
back to supermarkets.

First
,
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used
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bottles
will
be collected
at a collection point, such as waste zones. Then, with the power from high-pressure water, all the
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bottle
is cleaned
and ready to go to the recycling section.

At the recycling plant, each type of
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bottle
is divided
into three main categories: the transparent one, the green and the brown one. Three
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different
types
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come
with three
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different
factories to recycle specific
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bottles
. In the chart, the process to recycle is unknown.

After leaving the factory, they will
be transferred
to a furnace, then
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get
melted to become liquid glass. Together with new liquid glass
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comes
from other sources, the shape of the
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bottle
is defined
depends on the shape of the
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mould
.
Lastly
, a transport vehicle will bring the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottle
back to the customers’ supermarkets for consuming purpose.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The flowchart below shows the process of making recycled bottles.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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