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The graph below describes rainfall statistics for Somecountry. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. v. 1

The given single line graph represents how much of a rain fell in millimetres in Somecountry throughout 12 months of 2004. In total, the lowest number of precipitation was in February with only approximately 38 millimetres. Then the number fluctuated and reached the peak in Autumn at just above 60 millimetres. After that, the trend declined. The most of the rainy days were in Summer (June to August) when the rainfall reached the highest proportion just below 60 millimetres. However, during September there was a slight decline, while in October it increased and reached a peak at approximately 60 mm. On the other hand, in the Winter there was the lowest number of rainy days - in December and January the millimetres remained the same - approximately 50, while the next month it reached the lowest of of just below 40. To sum up, the highest proportion of raining was in the time span from July to the middle of October. In contrast, the lowest number of rainfall occured in the period from February to April.

IELTS academic The graph below describes rainfall statistics for Somecountry. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. v.1

The
given
single line graph represents how much of a rain fell in
millimetres
in
Somecountry
throughout 12 months of 2004. In total, the
lowest
number
of precipitation was in February with
only
approximately 38
millimetres
. Then the
number
fluctuated and
reached
the peak in Autumn at
just
above 60
millimetres
. After that, the trend declined. The most of the rainy days were in Summer (June to August) when the rainfall
reached
the highest proportion
just
below 60
millimetres
.
However
, during September there was a slight decline, while in October it increased and
reached
a peak at approximately 60 mm.
On the other hand
, in the Winter there was the
lowest
number
of rainy days
-
in December and January the
millimetres
remained the same
-
approximately 50, while the
next
month it
reached
the
lowest
of of
just
below 40. To sum up, the highest proportion of raining was in the time span from July to the middle of October.
In contrast
, the
lowest
number
of rainfall
occured
in the period from February to April.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
Academic
4 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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