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The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014 v.2

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014 v. 2
The given graphical representation offer a fleet glimpse of miscellaneous foreign languages mastered by the primary students taught at the school nestled at New Zealand the over the last 8 years. Statistical figures show that French language is consolidating its status as the prevalent foreign language whereas at the present time, German is misplacing its significance in the learning field amid school students in relation to early years. From 2006 onwards, the languages including French together with Japanese outnumber others, comprising roughly 28%. Concurrently, the figure of French language saw mild fluctuations between 28% and 33% from time to time and remained all-time high. I n stark contrast, the rates of Spanish language learners declines sharply by approximately 17% in 2013, however, it started it upward trend by just under 20% in 2014. By comparison, in 2006, the Spanish was third for this group, making up a little more than 20%, nevertheless, the trend began to swell by roughly 28% in 2011 and saw a steady decrease by 25% in 2014, becoming second largest one. In the interim, the percentage of students learning German language rose and fell at a lower level between 13% and 16% from 2006 to 2013, but experienced a slump in 2014. In particular, the rates of Chinese accelerated noticeably from a paltry 4% to 15% in the end of the year. On the contrary, the figure for other languages changes sporadically, rising up to 10 % in 2014.
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whereas at the present time, German is misplacing its significance in the learning field
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school students in relation to early years.

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including French together with Japanese outnumber others, comprising roughly 28%.
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a steady decrease by 25% in 2014, becoming second largest one.

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A man who knows two languages is worth two men.
French Proverb

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014 v. 2

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