Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed? v.5
Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed? v. 5
Nowadays we live in a global village, and we can contact any person lived in any part of the world in just a single click. Self-employment has been increasing at the rapid speed since last few years even though it has a few drawbacks. This essay will explain what the reasons for this fast change are and will also discuss the demerits of self-employments.
Every person wants to be the boss of his fate, and always has zeal to earn for himself by doing something independently. There are various reason for this type thinking. Firstly, in an organization, employees have to abide by the rules of the organization even though those rules may be liked by employees. For instance, in India, job holders must work minimum eight hours per day that can difficult for some person. Secondly, while work pressure could be another annoying reasons for staffs, the threatening for superior for not achieving targets makes the situation worse. However, a self-employed person makes his own rules, own objectives and own definition of work pressure. For instance, a doctor, a layers have their own financial need and hence work in a different ways; some works for 8 hours a day, while other works only 4 hours a day. Lastly, the efforts put by an employee to solve one task may be under monetary valuation, i. e. he is underpaid. Had he/she done similar effort on some individual work, he/she could have earn more remuneration. For example, the ethical hackers are paid as per their demand and ability. Had he been work in an organization, we would have drawn a limited salary, much lesser than his capability.
However, plethora of benefits are provided by companies to its employees to have cordial relationships in the organization, such as medical benefits, paid holidays and pension scheme. The earning of a self-employed person will be null if he/she fall sick. There would be no pension scheme for him after retirement, and must be depend on his own saving. But, in this today’s world, these issues can be well manageable if the self-employed person plans properly beforehand.
In conclusion, self-employment is increasing in today' s modern society because self-employed can earn handsome amount on his own effort, and targets and pressure can be his own set. However, demerits like non availability of free medical benefits, pension scheme and paid holidays could be major setback of self-employment. 
Nowadays we  
live
 in a global village, and we can contact any  
person
  lived
 in any part of the world in  
just
 a single click. Self-employment has been increasing at the rapid speed since last few years  
even though
 it has a few drawbacks. This essay will  
explain
 what the reasons for this  
fast
  change
 are and will  
also
 discuss the demerits of self-employments.
Every  
person
 wants to be the boss of his fate, and always has zeal to earn for himself by doing something  
independently
. There are various reason for this type thinking.  
Firstly
, in an  
organization
,  
employees
  have to
 abide by the  
rules
 of the  
organization
  even though
 those  
rules
 may  
be liked
 by  
employees
.  
For instance
, in India, job holders  
must
  work
 minimum eight hours per day that can difficult for  
some
  person
.  
Secondly
, while  
work
 pressure could be another annoying reasons for staffs, the threatening for superior for not achieving targets  
makes
 the situation worse.  
However
, a self-employed  
person
  makes
 his  
own
  rules
,  
own
 objectives and  
own
 definition of  
work
 pressure.  
For instance
, a doctor,  
a layers
 have their  
own
 financial need and  
hence
  work
 in a  
different
  ways
;  
some
 works for 8 hours a day, while other works  
only
 4 hours a day.  
Lastly
, the efforts put by an  
employee
 to solve one task may be under monetary valuation,  
i. e.
 he is underpaid. Had he/she done similar effort on  
some
 individual  
work
, he/she could have  
earn
 more remuneration.  
For example
, the ethical hackers  
are paid
 as per their demand and ability. Had he been  
work
 in an  
organization
, we would have drawn a limited salary, much lesser than his capability. 
However
, plethora of benefits  
are provided
 by  
companies
 to its  
employees
 to have cordial relationships in the  
organization
, such as medical benefits, paid holidays and pension scheme. The earning of a self-employed  
person
 will be null if he/she fall sick. There would be no pension scheme for him after retirement, and  
must
 be  
depend
 on his  
own
 saving.  
But
, in this  
today
’s world, these issues can be well manageable if the self-employed  
person
 plans  
properly
 beforehand. 
In conclusion
, self-employment is increasing in  
today&
#039; s modern society  
because
 self-employed can earn handsome amount on his  
own
 effort, and targets and pressure can be his  
own
 set.  
However
, demerits like  
non availability
 of free medical benefits, pension scheme and paid holidays could be major setback of self-employment. 
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