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For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letterstate what type of membership you have and how you have paid for thisgive details on how you have be v.11

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letterstate what type of membership you have and how you have paid for thisgive details on how you have be v. 11
Dear John, The undersign is the gold member of the club - " The Night" since last 5 years. It was a wonderful journey in this club, and I must say it is the best until date. However, I regret to inform you that I will not be to continue my membership from next month. The club was the best location since I joined, as I was new in this location and I had no friends initially. However, I am able make friendship with many other members; few of them have become my best friend. I must confess that the swimming pool and gym are the best among several other amenities. Furthermore, " Saturday night gala party" events will always remain close to my heart. Actually, I have got a new job offer from some other company in another city, that is why I have to discontinue the membership that I recently renewed. Although I really do want to leave this place, but sometime, we have to move on for the sake of better future. I would definitely miss this place! Finally, one last query - is there any possibility to get the refund of my latest renewal, as it is just one month old. I will be eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Bibhu Kalita
Dear John,

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The undersign
is the gold member of the club
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&quot
; The
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Night&quot
; since last 5 years. It was a wonderful journey in this club, and I
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must
say it is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
until date.
However
, I regret to inform you that I will not be to continue my membership from
next
month.

The club was the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
location since I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
, as I was new in this location and I had no friends
initially
.
However
, I am able
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
friendship with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other members; few of them have become my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
friend. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
confess that the swimming pool and gym are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
best
among several other amenities.
Furthermore
,
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&quot
; Saturday night gala
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party&quot
;
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events
will always remain close to my heart.

Actually, I have
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got
a new job offer from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in another city,
that is
why I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
discontinue the membership that I recently renewed. Although I
really
do want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
this place,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
sometime, we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
on for the sake of better future. I would definitely miss this place!
Finally
, one last query
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
is there any possibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the refund of my latest renewal, as it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
one month
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
.

I will be
eagerly
waiting for your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Bibhu
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Kalita
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS academic For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letterstate what type of membership you have and how you have paid for thisgive details on how you have be v. 11

Academic
  American English
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216 words
5.5
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