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The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. v.2

The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. v. 2
The graph shows how bean plant’s growth is affected when different fertilizers are used. It is evident that Granny’s Bloomers and K Mark fertilizer are two most effective composts in terms of bean plants growth while Miracle Gro is least effective. According to the column graph, bean plants grow as high as 13 centimetres without any fertilizer. Among the given composts, Granny’s Bloomers has the most significant effect on its growth which helps this plant grow to 27 cm on an average. The second most efficient fertilizer, K Mark, hike the growth to 22 cm which is 11 cm higher than the bean plants natural growth. When Job’s House Plant Spikers is utilised, the bean plants develop to 15 cm, a slight increase than the natural growth. However, with the Miracle Gro, bean plants raise to only 6 cm, 7 cm shorter than its natural growth without any fertilizer. In summary, among the four fertilizer brands, Granny’s Bloomers is the most effective one in terms of bean plant’s growth while Miracle Gro negatively affects its growth.
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. It is evident that Granny’s Bloomers and K Mark
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are two most effective composts in terms of
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while Miracle
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grow as high as 13
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without any
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. Among the
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grow to 27 cm on an average. The second most efficient
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, K Mark, hike the
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to 22 cm which is 11 cm higher than the
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without any fertilizer.

In summary, among the four
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brands, Granny’s Bloomers is the most effective one in terms of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. v. 2

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