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The table below shows types of YouTube ads, their average lengths and how long people watch them. v.1

The table below shows types of YouTube ads, their average lengths and how long people watch them. v. 1
The table lists down different types of YouTube advertisements and shows the average length of those ads, as well as the duration viewers watch these adverts. As can be seen, public service adverts have the highest average length and people’s preference to view YouTube ads greatly varies. Analysing the table data reveals that there are mainly ten different types of adverts on YouTube and among them, public service advertisements have the maximum length which is approximately a minute and 7 seconds long. Business & finance, entertainment and lifestyle related adverts have average half a minute duration while technology ads have slightly more length – roughly 40 seconds. On the contrary, travel, retail, consumer electronics, clothing and pharmaceuticals adverts have somewhat 20 to 30 seconds duration. The average duration of all types of ads shown on YouTube is exactly 38. 1 seconds. YouTube users watch slightly over 20 seconds of these ads which is approximately half the length of the average duration of all ads. Though people watch more than 28 seconds of public service ads, which is higher than that of other types of ads, the ratio between the actual length of ads and the duration people watch them is lower. In terms of this ratio, people watch more portion of entertainment & news, travel, retail and consumer electronics YouTube ads while they skip clothing, technology and business & finance adverts.
The table lists down
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viewers
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these adverts. As can be
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, public service adverts have the highest
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the table data reveals that there are
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of adverts on YouTube and among them, public service advertisements have the maximum
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which is approximately a minute and 7 seconds long. Business & finance, entertainment and lifestyle related adverts have
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half a minute
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while technology ads have
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roughly 40 seconds.
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, travel, retail, consumer electronics, clothing and pharmaceuticals adverts have somewhat 20 to 30 seconds
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. The
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of all
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of ads shown on YouTube is exactly 38. 1 seconds.
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YouTube users
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over 20 seconds of these ads which is approximately half the
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of all ads. Though
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people
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more than 28 seconds of public service ads, which is higher than that of other
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types
of ads, the ratio between the actual
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length
of ads and the
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people
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them is lower. In terms of this ratio,
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more portion of entertainment & news, travel, retail and consumer electronics YouTube ads while they skip clothing, technology and business & finance adverts.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below shows types of YouTube ads, their average lengths and how long people watch them. v. 1

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