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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. v.6

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. v. 6
The provided bar graph gives information on the four types of transports used in one European city during 1960, 1980 and 2000. As evident from the chart, major changes were observed in the usage of cars and buses and cars become the most preferred transportation type in the later year. In 1960, the maximum proportion of people travelled by bus (about 38%) compared to the 6% car owners. On the contrary, in 2000 around 37% population preferred travelling by cars, whereas only 15% bus passengers were there. The proportion of people who used tubes for transportation remained on an average between 20% to 30% during the 3 years period. It shows that tubes were popular even in later years. On the other hand, commuters who travelled by train increased from 19% in 1960 to 28% in 1980. However, the figures reduced to 22% by 2000. Cars and buses as transportations showed an opposite trend in their popularity. To summarise, there was a tremendous rise in the usage of cars for travelling to and from the office from 1960 to 2000.
The provided bar graph gives information on the four types of transports
used
in one European city during 1960, 1980 and 2000. As evident from the chart, major
changes
were observed
in the usage of
cars
and buses and
cars
become the most preferred transportation type in the later year.

In 1960, the maximum proportion of
people
travelled by bus (about 38%) compared to the 6%
car
owners.
On the contrary
, in 2000 around 37% population preferred travelling by
cars
, whereas
only
15% bus passengers were there. The proportion of
people
who
used
tubes for transportation remained on an average between 20% to 30% during the 3 years period. It
shows
that tubes were popular even in later years.
On the other hand
, commuters who travelled by train increased from 19% in 1960 to 28% in 1980.
However
, the figures
reduced
to 22% by 2000.
Cars
and buses as transportations
showed
an opposite trend in their popularity.

To
summarise
, there was a tremendous rise in the usage of
cars
for travelling to and from the office from 1960 to 2000.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. v. 6

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3 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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