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The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. v.2

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. v. 2
Three pie charts provided show academic records in 1990, 2000 and 2010 about the degrees that were granted in different fields at the National University. There were four majors given in those particular years - Computer Science, Medicine, Business and Law. In 1990, Computer Science and Business graduates were equally granted, which were 30% for both programmes. In this year 25% of graduates from National University were from Medicine and 15% from the faculty of Law. In the following years, both in 2000 and 2010, Computer Science graduates increases steadily and their percentage increased to 40% in 2000 and 45% in 2010. Unfortunately, business faculty graduates dropped by 10% in 2000 and this decline was 5% for Law graduates. However, Medicine faculty graduates increased by 5% in 2000 but again went back to 25% in the year 2010. As the data depicts, Computer Science became more popular over time and the highest percentage of graduates were granted in the given years from this major. Law and Medicine faculty remained almost the same in terms of granting of graduation degree, but the popularity and percentages of graduation from Business department decreased over time.
Three pie charts provided
show
academic records in 1990, 2000 and 2010 about the degrees that
were granted
in
different
fields at the National University. There were four majors
given
in those particular years
-
Computer
Science
,
Medicine
,
Business
and Law.

In 1990, Computer
Science
and
Business
graduates
were
equally
granted, which were 30% for both
programmes
. In this
year
25% of
graduates
from National University were from
Medicine
and 15% from the faculty of Law.
In
the following years, both in 2000 and 2010, Computer
Science
graduates
increases
steadily
and their percentage increased to 40% in 2000 and 45% in 2010. Unfortunately,
business
faculty
graduates
dropped by 10% in 2000 and this decline was 5% for Law
graduates
.
However
,
Medicine
faculty
graduates
increased by 5% in 2000
but
again went back to 25% in the
year
2010.

As the data depicts, Computer
Science
became more popular over time and the highest percentage of
graduates
were granted
in the
given
years from this major. Law and
Medicine
faculty remained almost the same in terms of granting of graduation degree,
but
the popularity and percentages of graduation from
Business
department decreased over time.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. v. 2

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