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The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket. v.2

The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket. v. 2
The town of Garston map gives information about two possible location of new Supermarket which will be planned to build in the town. < ! --break--> Overall, the first possible location for supermarket located on the countryside and the second possible location located in the Town Center with no traffic zone. < ! --break--> The first possible location is really close to the main road and the railway, in the north side and the south side of the new supermarket respectively. Both railway and main road are direct access to Hindon which have 10, 000 populations and located 12 km in Northwest from Garlston. < ! --break--> The second possible location of supermarket where located in the middle of Garldon who have 65, 000 populations, has easy access to Branston and Cranston, where located 16 km in the southwest and 25 km in the south east respectively. The population of Branston is 15, 000 and Cranston is 29, 000. The second possible places is also near of the housing and South Industry area.
The town of
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Garston
map gives information about two
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location
of new Supermarket which will
be planned
to build in the town.

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, the
first
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possible
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location
for supermarket
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located
on the countryside and the second
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possible
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location
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located
in the Town Center with no traffic zone.

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The
first
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possible
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location
is
really
close to the main road and the railway, in the north side and the south side of the new supermarket
respectively
. Both railway and main road are direct access to
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Hindon
which have 10, 000 populations and
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located
12 km in Northwest from
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Garlston
.

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The second
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possible
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location
of supermarket where
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located
in the middle of
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Garldon
who have 65, 000 populations, has easy access to
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Branston
and
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Cranston
, where
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located
16 km in the southwest and 25 km in the
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south east
respectively
. The population of
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Branston
is 15, 000 and
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Cranston
is 29, 000.
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The
second
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possible
places is
also
near of the housing and South Industry area.
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16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS academic The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket. v. 2

Academic
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7 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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