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The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket. v.2

The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket. v. 2
The town of Garston map gives information about two possible location of new Supermarket which will be planned to build in the town. < ! --break--> Overall, the first possible location for supermarket located on the countryside and the second possible location located in the Town Center with no traffic zone. < ! --break--> The first possible location is really close to the main road and the railway, in the north side and the south side of the new supermarket respectively. Both railway and main road are direct access to Hindon which have 10, 000 populations and located 12 km in Northwest from Garlston. < ! --break--> The second possible location of supermarket where located in the middle of Garldon who have 65, 000 populations, has easy access to Branston and Cranston, where located 16 km in the southwest and 25 km in the south east respectively. The population of Branston is 15, 000 and Cranston is 29, 000. The second possible places is also near of the housing and South Industry area.
The town of
Garston
map gives information about two
possible
location
of new Supermarket which will
be planned
to build in the town.

&lt
; !
--break--&gt
;

Overall
, the
first
possible
location
for supermarket
located
on the countryside and the second
possible
location
located
in the Town Center with no traffic zone.

&lt
; !
--break--&gt
;

The
first
possible
location
is
really
close to the main road and the railway, in the north side and the south side of the new supermarket
respectively
. Both railway and main road are direct access to
Hindon
which have 10, 000 populations and
located
12 km in Northwest from
Garlston
.

&lt
; !
--break--&gt
;

The second
possible
location
of supermarket where
located
in the middle of
Garldon
who have 65, 000 populations, has easy access to
Branston
and
Cranston
, where
located
16 km in the southwest and 25 km in the
south east
respectively
. The population of
Branston
is 15, 000 and
Cranston
is 29, 000.
The
second
possible
places is
also
near of the housing and South Industry area.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes
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IELTS academic The map below is of the wtown of Garlston. A new supermarket (S) is Planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket. v. 2

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  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
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