The given line graph depicts the data of average yearly spending of US consumers on the cell phone and residential phone services over a decade from 2001.
A cursory glance at the graph is enough to show that the customer spending on residential phone decreased and on the mobile phone had increased. In the beginning year, that was in 2001, the phone users spend massive $690 for residential phone services. Whereas, on mobile phone services they spent almost six-fold less than the land phone, that was 200$. Again, the very next year in 2002, the mobile customer spending pattern slightly went up to $300. Surprisingly, the residential phone users’ expenditure dropped to $650 in the same year. In the following years, the cell phone users spending skyrocketed and residential phone users spending dropped down and reached the same rate of $550 in 2006. Then, the land phone users spending pattern sank to $400 in 2010. However, the cell phone users spending hiked to almost two-fold than residential phone users, that was around $800 in the same period.
Overall, the residential phone user declined tremendously and cell phone users increased in the USA during the period of from 2001 to 2010.
The
given
line graph depicts the data of average yearly
spending
of US consumers on the cell
phone
and
residential
phone
services over a decade from 2001.
A cursory glance at the graph is
enough
to
show
that the customer
spending
on
residential
phone
decreased and on the mobile
phone
had increased. In the beginning
year
,
that was in 2001, the
phone
users
spend massive $690 for
residential
phone
services. Whereas, on mobile
phone
services they spent almost six-fold less than the land
phone
, that was
200$
. Again, the
very
next
year
in 2002, the mobile customer
spending
pattern
slightly
went up to $300.
Surprisingly
, the
residential
phone
users’
expenditure dropped to $650 in the same
year
. In the following years, the cell
phone
users
spending
skyrocketed and
residential
phone
users
spending
dropped down
and reached the same rate of $550 in 2006. Then, the land
phone
users
spending
pattern sank to $400 in 2010.
However
, the cell
phone
users
spending
hiked to almost two-fold than
residential
phone
users
, that was around $800 in the same period.
Overall
, the
residential
phone
user
declined
tremendously
and cell
phone
users
increased in the USA during the period of from 2001 to 2010.
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