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You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. Write at least 150 wordsDouble Line Graph Average House Prices from Target Ba v.2

The graph describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. Double Line Graph Average House Prices from Target Ba v. 2
The given line graph depicts the information about the average house prices of sold and on the market prices. Where the data represents fluctuations in both on the market and sold houses in year 2005 since the month of july to december. This is clear from the data which shows a steppe decline in the average price of on the market from $340, 000 to $330, 000 and then $320, 000 in the months of July, august and september respectively. However, if we see the prices of sold houses had not shown much of increase but a decrease was little higher as compared to the trend of on the market property with an increase of $500, 000 but showed steady decline and dropped upto $290, 000. Further more, there was no facts to be presented in the month of september to october in the year 2005 for sold houses, on the contrary there was a huge inclining trend to be observed with the jump of $100, 000 in the prices of on the market. By the time of last two months from the data mentioned sold houses gradually showed up with the increase by $150, 000 in the same there was sloppy decline on the market. To sum up, the trend of prices of the property showed a gradual increase in both trends but showed a fluctuation in further few months till december.
The
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line graph depicts the information about the average
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house
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prices
of sold and on the
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market
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prices
. Where the data represents fluctuations in both on the
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market
and sold
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houses
in year 2005 since the
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month
of
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july
to
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december
.

This is
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clear
from the data which
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shows
a steppe decline in the average
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price
of on the
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market
from $340, 000 to $330, 000 and then $320, 000 in the
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months
of July, august and
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september
respectively
.
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, if we
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prices
of sold
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houses
had not shown much of
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increase
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but
a decrease was
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little
higher
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as
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trend
of on the
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market
property with an
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increase
of $500, 000
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but
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showed
steady decline and dropped
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upto
$290, 000.
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more,
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in the
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month
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september
to
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october
in the year 2005 for sold
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houses
,
on the contrary
there was a huge inclining
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trend
to
be observed
with the jump of $100, 000 in the
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prices
of on the
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market
. By the time of last two
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months
from the data mentioned sold
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houses
gradually
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showed
up with the
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increase
by $150, 000 in the same there was sloppy decline on the market.

To sum up, the
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trend
of
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prices
of the property
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showed
a gradual
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increase
in both
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trends
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but
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showed
a fluctuation in
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few
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months
till
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december
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. Double Line Graph Average House Prices from Target Ba v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
233 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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