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The given maps show two di erent underground passage frameworks for autos in two Australian refers to v.2

The given maps show two di erent underground passage frameworks for autos in two Australian refers to v. 2
The given maps illustrate two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cites. Overall, there are a number of differences between the two tunnel systems, in terms of the cost, size, length, time of construction, and the surrounding environment. The first tunnel cost approximately half as much as the second tunnel to construct, however, the first tunnel was significantly smaller in terms of length and vehicle capacity. The first tunnel also took much longer to construct. The first tunnel, which took twelve years to construct between 1986 and 1998, cost $555 million and was built underneath a body of water and sand. Meanwhile, the second tunnel only took four years for completion but cost twice as much, at $1. 1 billion, and was constructed beneath a layer of stone and clay. The size of the tunnels was also substantially different, with the first tunnel being 1. 5 meters high and 2. 2km long, and the second tunnel being 2. 5m high and 3. 6 km long. The first tunnel system is four lanes wide, while the second tunnel system is six lanes wide.
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given
maps illustrate two
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different
underground
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tunnel
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systems
for cars in two Australian cites.

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, there are a number of differences between the two
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tunnel
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systems
, in terms of the
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cost
, size, length, time of construction, and the surrounding environment. The
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first
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tunnel
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cost
approximately half as much as the second
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tunnel
to construct,
however
, the
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first
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tunnel
was
The extreme adjective for small is "tiny", or "minimal".
significantly smaller
in terms of length and vehicle capacity. The
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first
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tunnel
also
took much longer to construct.

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The
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first
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tunnel
, which took twelve years to construct between 1986 and 1998,
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cost
$555 million and
was built
underneath a body of water and sand. Meanwhile, the second
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tunnel
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only
took four years for completion
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but
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cost
twice as much, at $1. 1 billion, and
was constructed
beneath a layer of stone and clay.

The size of the
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tunnels
was
also
substantially
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different
, with the
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first
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tunnel
being 1. 5 meters high and 2.
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2km
long, and the second
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tunnel
being 2.
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5m
high and 3. 6 km long. The
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first
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tunnel
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system
is four lanes wide, while the second
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tunnel
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system
is six lanes wide.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS academic The given maps show two di erent underground passage frameworks for autos in two Australian refers to v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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