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The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people. v.3

The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people. v. 3
The chart represents the proportion of British people' s preferences with four different types of houses in UK in 2005. Overall, majority British people preferred flat in London, whereas detached and semi-detached houses were more popular among the people of Oxford and Cambridge. Looking in details, about 58% citizen of London preferred flats while the rest of housing types were accounted for lesser than 20% preferences. Meanwhile, detached houses were highly preferable by the citizens from Oxford (of about 35%) than semi-detached (of close to 28%). This figure was same for people of Oxford for preference in semi-detached houses while detached houses were lesser of around 23% and closet o 30% for flat. It is apparent that, terraced houses were the least popular types of houses which consisted of lesser than 20% for all people from UK.
The chart represents the proportion of British
people&
#039; s preferences with four
different
types of
houses
in UK in 2005.

Overall
, majority British
people
preferred flat in London, whereas detached and semi-detached
houses
were more popular among the
people
of Oxford and Cambridge.

Looking in
details
, about 58% citizen of London preferred flats while the rest of housing types
were accounted
for lesser than 20% preferences.

Meanwhile, detached
houses
were
highly
preferable by the citizens from Oxford (of about 35%) than semi-detached (of close to 28%). This figure was same for
people
of Oxford for preference in semi-detached
houses
while detached
houses
were lesser of around 23% and closet o 30% for flat.

It is apparent that, terraced
houses
were the least popular types of
houses
which consisted of lesser than 20% for all
people
from UK.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people. v. 3

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137 words
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