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The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people. v.2

The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people. v. 2
The given bar graph shows data on the housing preferences of UK citizens and this data was taken as part of a survey made on 2005. As is observed from the data, most of the London dwellers preferred flats while detached & semi-detached houses were more popular among the people of Oxford and Cambridge. As is presented in the bar graph, about 58% citizen of London preferred flats while less than 30% people of Oxford and Cambridge preferred flats as their housing. Interestingly people from all those three cities preferred terrace houses in a similar percentage which is around 15-18 %. Least preferred housing type for London people was detached houses which were preferred by less than 10% of London citizens while this housing type was preferred by about 25% Oxford people and 35% Cambridge people. Finally, semi-detached houses were more preferred by Oxford and Cambridge people (about 27%) and only 17% people from London preferred this sort of housing. In conclusion, the survey result summarises that flat was the most preferred housing solution for London people while Oxford and Cambridge's people preferred detached and semi-detached housing.
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bar graph
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shows
data on the housing preferences of UK citizens and this data
was taken
as part of a survey made on 2005. As
is observed
from the data, most of the London dwellers
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preferred
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flats
while detached & semi-detached
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houses
were more popular among the
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people
of
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Oxford
and Cambridge.

As
is presented
in the bar graph, about 58% citizen of London
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preferred
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flats
while less than 30%
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people
of
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Oxford
and Cambridge
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preferred
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flats
as their housing.
Interestingly
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people
from all those three cities
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preferred
terrace
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houses
in a similar percentage which is around 15-18 %. Least
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preferred
housing type for London
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people
was detached
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houses
which were
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preferred
by less than 10% of London citizens while this housing type was
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preferred
by about 25%
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Oxford
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people
and 35% Cambridge
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people
.
Finally
, semi-detached
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houses
were more
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preferred
by
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Oxford
and Cambridge
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people
(about 27%) and
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only
17%
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people
from London
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preferred
this sort of housing.

In conclusion
, the survey result
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summarises
that
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flat
was the most
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preferred
housing solution for London
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people
while
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Oxford
and Cambridge's
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people
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preferred
detached and semi-detached housing.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The following chart illustrates the results of a British survey taken in 2005 related to Housing preferences of UK people. v. 2

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3 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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