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The first chart shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. v.1

The first chart shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. v. 1
The presented infographics give information about the reasons and destinations of a hundred thousand British tourists travelled abroad within the period between 1994 and 1998. During the given period of time the number of UK residents travelled outside of the country increased steadily, except this figure dropped slightly to 21610 in 1995, from 22072 in 1994 to 28828 in 1998. The main reason for travelling was holidays; nearly third of all the tourists travelled abroad. The second and third reasons were business trips and visits to friend and families, respectively. Most of the surveyed tourists did not travel far from the UK since approximately 85 per cent of them went to West European countries throughout the given period. The least number of the British tourists visited the USA and Canada at the same time. The table and bar chart provide with information that between 1994 and 1998 the number of British tourists did not rise considerably and the most favorite destination was Western Europe.
The presented infographics give information about the reasons and destinations of a hundred thousand British
tourists
travelled abroad within the period between 1994 and 1998.

During the
given
period of time the number of UK residents travelled
outside of
the country increased
steadily
, except this figure dropped
slightly
to 21610 in 1995, from 22072 in 1994 to 28828 in 1998. The main reason for travelling was holidays;
nearly
third of all the
tourists
travelled abroad. The second and third reasons were business trips and visits to friend and families,
respectively
.

Most of the surveyed
tourists
did not travel far from the UK since approximately 85 per cent of them went to West European countries throughout the
given
period. The least number of the British
tourists
visited the USA and Canada at the same time.

The table and bar chart provide with information that between 1994 and 1998 the number of British
tourists
did not rise
considerably
and the most favorite destination was Western Europe.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The first chart shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. v. 1

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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