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The chart below shows the percentage of the whole population in four countries from 1950 2002 with projections to 2050 v.2

The chart below shows the percentage of the whole population in four countries from 1950 2002 with projections to 2050 v. 2
The bar chart indicates the ratio of the world population in India, China, USA and Japan from 1950 to 2002, and it also shows the prediction of 2050. As we can see from the graph, the proportion of population of China ranked the first in 1950 and 2002. Though it dropped down slightly from 26% to 24%, it is predicted that the population of China will continue to decrease to 19% in 2050. Besides, India as second to China in the percentage of population, increased from 15%(1950)to 19%(2002), even come in the first place in the middle of 21 century with scale of 21%. In addition, the number of people in USA occupied 10% in 1950, fell to 7% in 2002, the predicted value of which will be the same in 2050. Moreover, the percentage of Japan keep declining from 5% to 3% in 2050. To sum up, India will replace China become the world’s first populous country by 2050 and USA and Japan will face enormous difficulties in the problems of population aging and a low birth rate.
The bar chart indicates the ratio of the world
population
in India, China, USA and Japan from 1950 to 2002, and it
also
shows
the prediction of 2050.

As we can
see
from the graph, the proportion of
population
of China ranked the
first
in 1950 and 2002. Though it
dropped down
slightly
from 26% to 24%, it
is predicted
that the
population
of China will continue to decrease to 19% in 2050.
Besides
, India as second to China in the percentage of
population
, increased from 15%(1950)to 19%(2002), even
come
in the
first
place in the middle of
21 century
with scale of 21%.
In addition
, the number of
people
in USA
occupied 10% in 1950, fell to 7% in 2002, the predicted value of which will be the same in 2050.
Moreover
, the percentage of Japan
keep
declining from 5% to 3% in 2050.

To sum up, India will replace China become the world’s
first
populous country by 2050 and USA and Japan will face enormous difficulties in the problems of
population
aging and a low birth rate.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of the whole population in four countries from 1950 2002 with projections to 2050 v. 2

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