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The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.4

The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland.
the chart illustrates the information about three distinct population changes namely fertility rate, morality rate and population growth rate in Scotland form 1940 to 2020 overall, it is clearly evident that while the rate of birth and population growth are predicted to experience the falling trend, death rate is anticipated the opposite trend. Interestingly, the growth' s population rate is consistently lover than others during given time. in the first year, 1940, the birth rate hit its peak at exactly 2. 5% compared to 1. 5% and approximately 0. 8% of death rate and population growth rate respectively. over the following 25 years the 25 years, the population growth rate hit its the highest point, 1. 5%. Morality rate and birth rate saw the decreasing trend with roughly 2%, 0. 5% in turns in 2020, the death rate is projected to undergo the rising tend with 0. 7% after a slightly decrease time from 1975, the population growth, by contrast, has a prediction to see no changes from the lowest figure in 2003. regarding the rate of fertility, before standing at nearly 0. 7 % in 2020, it went down gradually from 1. 3% in 1970 and under 1% in 1990.
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chart illustrates the information about three distinct
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population
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namely
fertility
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rate
, morality
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and
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population
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in Scotland form 1940 to 2020

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overall
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evident that while the
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of birth and
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growth
are predicted
to experience the falling trend, death
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rate
is anticipated
the opposite trend.
Interestingly
, the
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is
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in
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hit its peak at exactly 2. 5% compared to 1. 5% and approximately 0. 8% of death
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and
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respectively
.
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over
the following 25 years the 25 years, the
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the highest point, 1. 5%. Morality
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and birth
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the decreasing trend with roughly 2%, 0. 5% in turns

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in
2020, the death
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is projected
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, by contrast, has a prediction to
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from the lowest figure in 2003.
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IELTS academic The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland.

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