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The diagrams billow show the design for a wind turbine and its location. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and compare where relevant. v.1

The diagrams billow show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
The picture highlights not only a design of a wind turbine but also discribes about the locations of its too. On the picture we can see there are three large blades which are made with fiberglass of wood and those blades sensors are controled and adjusted by a computer. The three blades always moves round by round and help to produce energy as well. On the other hand, there is a tiny sensor that shows speed as well as direction. Besides, Here is a small generator near the wind sensor and it may produce near about 1. 5 megawatts output also. The three blades, wind sensor and generator are on the top of the tower and the big tower was made by steel. The image shows us two different places for the placement for the turbine one of them is located on very top and the another is situated not so high as first one. Another hand we can see a small domestic turbine also which produce probably 100 kilowatts only. At last if we keep a look on the photo we can find that a wind turbine is fully depends on the air supply for electricity production.
The picture highlights not
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a design of a
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wind
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turbine
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but
also
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discribes
about the locations of
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too.

On the picture we can
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there are three large
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blades
which
are made
with fiberglass of wood and those
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blades
sensors are
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controled
and adjusted by a computer. The three
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blades
always
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moves
round by round and
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help
to produce energy
as well
.
On the other hand
, there is a tiny sensor that
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shows
speed
as well
as direction.
Besides
, Here is a
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small
generator near the
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wind
sensor and it may produce near about 1. 5 megawatts output
also
. The three
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blades
,
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wind
sensor and generator are on the top of the tower and the
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big
tower
was made
by steel. The image
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shows
us two
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different
places for the placement for the
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turbine
one of them
is located
on
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very
top and the another
is situated
not
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so
high as
first
one. Another hand we can
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see
a
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small
domestic
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turbine
also
which produce
probably
100 kilowatts
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only
.

At last if we
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keep
a look on the photo we can find that a
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wind
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turbine
is
fully
depends on the air supply for electricity production.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagrams billow show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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