Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The map billow is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new super market. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The map billow is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new super market.
The map highlights not only the town of Garlsdon but also shows two possible sites for a new supermarket. Here two places is indecate for making the supermarket. One of them is on the country side and the another is on the town center where is no traffic zone. We can see in main roads as well as railway accrose behind S1 site but in S2 site the railway goes over it. There have some industries as well as housing near both of the sites too. The Hindon where almost 10000 people live is very near from the S1 part. On the other hand the S2 part is also near from Bransdon and Cransdon too. Near about 15000 and 29000 people live to those area. At the sum the two possible sites are different from eachother.
The map highlights not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the town of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Garlsdon
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
two possible
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sites
for a new supermarket.

Here two places is
Possible spelling mistake found.
indecate
for making the supermarket. One of them is on the country side and the another is on the town center where is no traffic zone. We can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
in main roads
as well
as railway
Possible spelling mistake found.
accrose
behind S1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in S2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
the railway goes over it. There have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
industries
as well
as housing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
near
both of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sites
too. The
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hindon
where almost 10000
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
The usual collocation for "near" is "to" not "from". Did you mean simply "near to" or "further from"?
near from the
S1 part.
On the other hand
the S2 part is
also
The usual collocation for "near" is "to" not "from". Did you mean simply "near to" or "further from"?
near from Bransdon
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Cransdon
too.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Near
about 15000 and 29000
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
to
Did you mean "this area" or "those areas"?
those area
.

At the sum the two possible
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sites
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from
Possible spelling mistake found.
eachother
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The map billow is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new super market.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
136 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The map billow is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new super market. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2