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The bar chart below shows the exporting rate of 4 different types of fruit in the USA, Mexico and South Africa in 2012, measured by tons. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The bar chart below shows the exporting rate of 4 different types of fruit in the USA, Mexico and South Africa in 2012, measured by tons.
The presented column graph compares 3 distinct nations in terms of their fruit exporting capacity in 2012. Overall, it is evident that orange was exported with the highest amount among 4 items by all countries. However, regarding to individual types of fruit, the largest exporting capabilities were occupied by different nations. Turning into detail, over 1000 tons of orange was sold abroad by the USA in 2012, followed by a below – 1000 – ton figure of Mexico. Likewise, the USA and Mexico were also the two countries having the biggest masses of exported lemon among 3 nations, with more than 700 tons and above 600 tons, respectively. By contrast, the figures for South Africa were significantly lower, making it rank third in both sections. With respect to remaining fruits, in foreign sales of grape and other fruit, South Africa surpassed other countries with the highest amount of about 500 tons and exactly 200 tons, respectively. Meanwhile, The USA and Mexico shared the same amount of grape with over 300 tons, whereas the former’s number of other fruit was slightly higher than the latter’s.
The presented column graph compares 3 distinct nations in terms of their
fruit
exporting capacity in 2012.

Overall
, it is evident that orange
was exported
with the highest amount among 4 items by all countries.
However
,
regarding to
individual types of
fruit
, the largest exporting capabilities
were occupied
by
different
nations.

Turning into detail, over 1000 tons of orange
was sold
abroad by the USA in 2012, followed by a below
1000
ton figure of Mexico.
Likewise
, the USA and Mexico were
also
the two countries having the biggest masses of exported lemon among 3 nations, with more than 700 tons and above 600 tons,
respectively
. By contrast, the figures for South Africa were
significantly
lower, making it rank third in both sections.

With respect to remaining
fruits
, in foreign sales of grape and other
fruit
, South Africa surpassed other countries with the highest amount of about 500 tons and exactly 200 tons,
respectively
. Meanwhile, The USA and Mexico shared the same amount of grape with over 300 tons, whereas the former’s number of other
fruit
was
slightly
higher than the latter’s.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the exporting rate of 4 different types of fruit in the USA, Mexico and South Africa in 2012, measured by tons.

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4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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