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The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built.
The given diagram illustrates the process of constructing a tent, which is called tepee. The process consists of the eight most important stages, starting with three sticks fastened by a rope and ending with the canvas fixed to the ground. Firstly, a rope is used to tie three long sticks together. Then the sticks are elevated to form a big tripod. Next, more sticks are attached to the tripod to consolidate its structure. All the sticks are bound again to ensure its stability afterwards. In the fifth stage of process, a canvas is enfolded around a stick. Then this stick is lifted and tied to other sticks. The canvas is unwrapped onto the tent. In the next stage, metal pins are used to attach the canvas. Finally, the bottom of the tepee is fixed to the ground by using the bollards and the ropes. Now the tent is finished and ready to use.
The
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given
diagram illustrates the process of constructing a tent, which
is called
tepee.

The process consists of the eight most
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important
stages, starting with three
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sticks
fastened by a rope and ending with the
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canvas
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fixed
to the ground.

Firstly
, a rope is
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used
to tie three long
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sticks
together. Then the
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sticks
are elevated
to form a
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big
tripod.
Next
, more
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sticks
are attached
to the tripod to consolidate its structure. All the
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sticks
are bound
again to ensure its stability afterwards.

In the fifth stage of process, a
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canvas
is enfolded
around a
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stick
. Then this
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stick
is lifted
and tied to other
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sticks
. The
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canvas
is unwrapped
onto the tent. In the
next
stage, metal pins are
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used
to attach the
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canvas
.
Finally
, the bottom of the tepee is
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fixed
to the ground by using the bollards and the ropes.
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Now
the tent
is finished
and ready to
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use
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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