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The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the United Kingdom between 1970 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the United Kingdom between 1970 and 2004.
The graph indicates the index figures of different categories of wild birds between the years 1970 and 2004 in the United Kingdom. It uses an index starting at 100 in 1970 and the figures are shown yearly. The all species category show the overall index between coastal, woodland and farmland species. It shows a growth from 100 to 110 by the year 1977, after that it fluctuated widely between 110 to 100 index points. There is a rise in coastal species from 1970 to 1980 when the figure reached a peak at 135 index points, then, there is a fluctuation, until 2004, keeping similar figures. There is a rose on woodland species from 1970 to 1972, reaching a high at 110 points, after that the graph shows a downward trend, reaching 85 index points in 1992, after that, the figures remained steady. The fourth category, farmland species reached 110 index points in 1776, after that the population dropped dramatically, showing 55 points in 1998, being this the lowest point reached by the four categories represented. Coastal species is the only category above the overall, showing the most important growth, while the farmland species population plunged. Woodland species displays a decrease in its figures, below the All species category.
The graph indicates the
index
figures
of
different
categories
of wild birds between the years 1970 and 2004 in the United Kingdom. It
uses
an
index
starting at 100 in 1970 and the
figures
are shown
yearly.

The all species
category
show
the
overall
index
between coastal, woodland and farmland species. It
shows
a growth from 100 to 110 by the year 1977, after that it fluctuated
widely
between 110 to 100
index
points.

There is a rise in coastal species from 1970 to 1980 when the
figure
reached a peak at 135
index
points
, then, there is a fluctuation, until 2004, keeping similar figures.

There is a rose on woodland species from 1970 to 1972, reaching a high at 110
points
, after that the graph
shows
a downward trend, reaching 85
index
points
in 1992, after that, the
figures
remained steady.

The fourth
category
, farmland species reached 110
index
points
in 1776, after that the population dropped
dramatically
, showing 55
points
in 1998, being this the lowest
point
reached by the four
categories
represented.

Coastal species is the
only
category
above the
overall
, showing the most
important
growth, while the farmland species population plunged. Woodland species displays a decrease in its
figures
, below
the All
species
category
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the United Kingdom between 1970 and 2004.

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