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The charts show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University. Describe the difference and compare them if possible. v.2

The charts show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University. Describe the difference and compare them if possible. v. 2
The pie chart demonstrates the proportions of many factors, making undergraduates and postgraduates choose Parker University. Overall, It is clear that the majority of both undergraduate and postgraduate students choose Parker University based on the cost and university’s reputation with the biggest share goes to the latter factor. Looking into the details of the chart, 35% of undergraduates choose the university because of its reputation while the cost factor constitutes the second of 24%. However, these proportions are higher in the postgraduate group with up to 42% of reputation and 32% of cost respectively. When it comes to other factors, the biggest difference could be observed in the personal accommodation with a percentage of 18% in undergraduates, three times higher than that in postgraduates. It is true that the figures for location and availability of accommodation are significantly low in the two student groups, accounting for around 6 to 8%. The same pattern goes for proportions of other factors.
The pie chart demonstrates the proportions of
many
factors
, making
undergraduates
and
postgraduates
choose Parker University.

Overall
, It is
clear
that the majority of both
undergraduate
and
postgraduate
students choose Parker University based on the cost and university’s reputation with the biggest share goes to the latter factor.

Looking into the
details
of the chart, 35% of
undergraduates
choose the university
because
of its reputation while the cost
factor
constitutes the second of 24%.
However
, these proportions are higher in the
postgraduate
group with up to 42% of reputation and 32% of cost
respectively
.

When it
comes
to other
factors
, the biggest difference could
be observed
in the personal accommodation with a percentage of 18% in
undergraduates
, three times higher than that in
postgraduates
. It is true that the figures for location and availability of accommodation are
significantly
low in the two student groups, accounting for around 6 to 8%. The same pattern goes for proportions of other
factors
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The charts show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University. Describe the difference and compare them if possible. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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