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The chart shows the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 & 2010. v.2

The chart shows the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 & 2010. v. 2
The two pie charts show English students' proportion at one university, who can speak different languages apart from their native language, during 2000 and 2010. Overall, in both years, the most significant languages were Spanish and another language, which together accounted for over half the proportion of language, while german language and other kinds of language generated the least proportion of speaking language in England. In all type of language were spoken by the university students, was only minimal range over the 10 years. According to the pie charts, 20% of students spoke only the native language in 2000, and this showed a fell off about 10% in 2005. Likewise, in 2000, french spoke 10% of students, which dropped marginally to 10% a decade later. Furthermore, the proportion of german language remained the same over the 10 years. Moreover, the remaining proportion of languages, there was about 5% growth in the language of Spain, another language, and to other languages to 35%, 20%, and 15%, respectively.
The two pie charts
show
English
students&
#039;
proportion
at one university, who can speak
different
languages
apart from their native
language
, during 2000 and 2010.

Overall
, in both years, the most significant
languages
were Spanish and another
language
, which together accounted for over half the
proportion
of
language
, while
german
language
and other kinds of
language
generated the least
proportion
of speaking
language
in England. In all type of
language
were spoken
by the university
students
, was
only
minimal range over the 10 years.

According to the pie charts, 20% of
students
spoke
only
the native
language
in 2000, and this
showed
a fell off about 10% in 2005.
Likewise
, in 2000, french spoke 10% of
students
, which dropped
marginally
to 10% a decade later.
Furthermore
, the
proportion
of
german
language
remained the same over the 10 years.

Moreover
, the remaining
proportion
of
languages
, there was about 5% growth in the
language
of Spain, another
language
, and to other
languages
to 35%, 20%, and 15%,
respectively
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart shows the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 & 2010. v. 2

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